The vocals are nice but the song feels like its divided in two, with the vocalist doing her thing while the backtrack does not feel connected to it. Everything in the songs feels disconnected. The back track should become the glue of every component of the song, not just a separate element. That's just my idea. Not saying this song is complete trash, just saying it needs improvement, which I think you can totally do! Can't wait to hear what you make next on your quest through music!